When The Avengers was finally released, there
was a lot of talk on the forums and blogs about how it it okay, good
even....but not great. A lot of that has been blamed on the script.
Ive been working on some screenplays myself and
so I have a decent idea of the problems a writer can face: problems with
progressing elements of the story, issues with protagonists/antagonists, and
the general holes they can write themselves into. It is with this in mind, that
I have to say, there is some truly impressive stuff at work in Joss Whedon's
screenplay that 99% of the audience wont appreciate.
1. The Back story problem
A.k.a how much back story to include.
The Avengers was feted as the ultimate
superhero movie, coming off the back of 5 other films which were essentially
building up to this. As it happens, this created a problem. Most of the
audience wont have re-watched all these films in the build-up (I did, but that's
because I'm a nerd). The script then has to strike a fine balance, making sure
to give the audience the vital information they need, without making it feel
like everything is being repeated. Whedon's script makes it seem as though we
jump straight into things full throttle, with no background, but the beauty is
that you never feel lost, because all the vital information is still provided,
without dragging the plot down by rehashing old stories. And this all happens
with perfect subtlety
2. The origin story problem
Origin stories are great for comic films, and
Marvel has had numerous successes with these in the past, including all the
Marvel Universe films that preceded The Avengers. These generally involve the
origins of one hero, and its here the difference lies. The Avenger is the
origins of a group, a story which takes inherently longer to tell as their are
more primary characters. In addition, origin stories work by humanising their
characters, and drawing a connection with the audience based on where these
characters came from. The Avengers can't use this trick because these stories
have already been covered in previous films. It is with great skill the the
script manages to give us a decent story of how the avengers formed, one which
draws us into the story and the characters, without disproportionately bloating
the running time, and allowing room for a main plot too.
3. The Hulk problem
Whedon himself has been vocal about this
particular point. The thrill of the action is in watching characters with
vulnerability; characters with something to lose. The Hulk is pretty
indestructible, so watching him destroy enemy fighters becomes somewhat
soulless and uninteresting. Whedon identified this problem, and focused the
script on banner, not his green alter-ego. The Hulk falling from the SHIELD ship
also takes him out of the action, shifting the focus to other characters in the
fight
4. The Captain America Problem
Captain America is so archaic and jingoistic a
hero, that it was a brilliant feat making him a vulnerable hero in his own
film. This created a problem, because for those unfamiliar with the rich
back story of the comics, it simply doesn't make sense that Steve Rogers is the
leader of The Avengers. His powers are the weakest, and in the context of the
films, he's not even fully acclimatised to the modern world. Rather than shy
away from this issue, the script confronts it head-on, and shows you that
Captain Rogers has heart. He does the right thing, and makes the sacrifices
and, in the end, that's what allows him to command the respect to lead. It also
deftly uses Stark to make this point, being the most cynical and difficult to
control of the bunch.
5. The hero/protagonist problem
Films work by having protagonists face a series
of personal challenges, and eventually rising up to face those challenges. This
is truest of all in a superhero tale. Whedon realised this, and thus, in his
script, he allows for a protagonists tale to take place within the ensemble.
With Iron Man, he creates a moment of nobility, where Stark realises the error
of his ways, and is prepared to make the ultimate sacrifice. This whilst still running
an ensemble story
6. Iron man to Thor: no hard feelings Point Break
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